For the sake of pseudosanity
I am posting this poem in regards to a query placed by pseudosanity. I suppose this poem has no real title, and I refuse to give it the trite "Untitled":
Asleep one night, I had a dream,
The voice was calling to me…
“Break away from the obscenity of the world
Make a space
Far from the maddening crowd
Scream into the empty night
Fall into the void.
Red – the broken body, mutilated – the colour of passion
Green – eyes – JEALOUSY – lust for ME
SACRIFICE FOR ME!
Show love in a vast desert
Prove that it is a distorted scam
Break the mold, absolve the fantasy.”
“Wake up dear, it was all a dream.”
Asleep one night, I had a dream,
The voice was calling to me…
“Break away from the obscenity of the world
Make a space
Far from the maddening crowd
Scream into the empty night
Fall into the void.
Red – the broken body, mutilated – the colour of passion
Green – eyes – JEALOUSY – lust for ME
SACRIFICE FOR ME!
Show love in a vast desert
Prove that it is a distorted scam
Break the mold, absolve the fantasy.”
“Wake up dear, it was all a dream.”
posted by Vixen at 12:20 AM
4 Comments:
ohh.. you are really sweet. I really like the poem, but I kind of lost it towards the end.... what does "sacrifice for me" mean? Dont answer that.. I am just thinking out loud. I am sure I will get it soon enough. Well hopefully.
On a different note, would you mind if I linked you on my blog?
It's a poem and my masterpiece, pseudo, meaning: I'm not explaining it!
By all means, link me up, I've already taken the liberty with your blog.
hmmm.. maybe you are to poetry what Piccaso was to art. Both of your work are masterful, but probably dont mean anything ;-)
I told you others would appreciate your poetry, it's truly worthy of being published.
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